初中英語作文：文不達意
在平凡的'學(xué)習(xí)、工作、生活中，大家都寫過作文吧，作文可分為小學(xué)作文、中學(xué)作文、大學(xué)作文（論文）。相信許多人會覺得作文很難寫吧，以下是小編幫大家整理的初中英語作文：文不達意，歡迎閱讀，希望大家能夠喜歡。
「要點領(lǐng)悟」在英語書面表達的提示信息中，常有這樣的語句“可適當增加細節(jié)”或“可適當發(fā)揮”，但所增加的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該與文章相關(guān)。如果所“發(fā)揮”的內(nèi)容與文章無關(guān)，就是“畫蛇添足”了。 「信息提示」
根據(jù)下面的4幅圖畫用英語寫一篇短文，要求故事包括所有圖畫的主要內(nèi)容，可以適當增加細節(jié)，使意思連貫。詞數(shù)在100以上。
「習(xí)作實況」One day，an old woman was crossing the street with a basket in her hand. She went to do some shopping. Just then a car came up and she was knocked down onto the ground. She was badly injured and couldn‘t move. But to everyone’s anger, the car ran away as quickly as it could . The old woman had to lie on the ground and cried（1）。 Luckily，a man，who was swee ping the street nearby，saw this. He ran quickly up to her and helped her stand up. He was angry with the driver（2）。 Then he took her to the nearest hospital. There a doctor examined her care fully and gave her some medical care. After that，the dustman took her home. When the old woman‘s daughter knew what had happened to her mother，she was moved deeply and thanke d him very much. Aft er a while the dustm an left and went to do his work. The daughter thanked him again (（3）�！妇v點撥」(1)此句與圖中提示不相符，應(yīng)刪去。(2)此處加寫這句屬多余，也與圖畫內(nèi)容不符。(3)文章寫到“……very much.”處已經(jīng)很完整了，加上這一句使行文顯得重復(fù)、累贅。
「精品范文」 One day，an old woman was crossing the street with a basket in her hand. She went to do some shopping. Just then a car came up and she was knocked down onto the ground. She was badly injured and couldn‘t move a little. Luckily，a man，who was sweeping the street nearby，saw this. He ran quickly up to her and helped her stand up. Then he took her to the nearest hospital. There a doctor examined her carefully and gave her some medical care. Af ter that，the dustman took her home. When the old woman’s daughter kne w what had happened to her mother，she was moved deeply and thanked him very much.
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